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Oh, dear... [Jan. 2nd, 2007|01:01 am]
Happy new year, everyone!

Well, as you may have noticed, I'm no longer updating as often as I used to. Wil got it right, this blog thing requires a lot of energy, and it's not easy to keep up.

There's work, other real life stuff, and I'm also reading a lot of books, so I have little free time. I haven't found the time to read many MMSA stories lately, much less to write about them.

Therefore there's no need to fool myself. I can't keep updating at the same rhythm. Otherwise this would become a duty instead of a fun thing to do. I will keep the blog, but I will only post occasionally, mostly about stories that I particularly enjoy, but not about all of them! Sorry to those who followed the blog but I hope you'll understand. If only the day had 34 hours...

And hopefully, I'll find time to read more stories  :-)
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The Best Boy in the Whole Blooming World - Part 02, by Realist II [Dec. 21st, 2006|05:47 pm]
Second chapter in this outstanding series. A sixteen year old boy who is a prefect at his school is hired by a rich couple to look after their 11-year-old son during the holidays. David, the younger boy, is quite active and full of energy and his parents wanted to hire an older boy who could be responsible and look after him but also keep up with him and let him have fun.

David got in trouble and was punished in part one, but he is not resentful at all and hatches a plan to give Michael a peculiar birthday present. Romanticized spankings, brave and noble but mischievous boys...

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Three short F/m stories [Dec. 21st, 2006|05:20 pm]
Two stories by Brians Sister and one by Kyle2 about boys and teenagers being given humiliating spankings by female authority figures. Quick and short, with not much attention being paid to good writing or character development, but can be interesting nevertheless for those who enjoy F/m stories.

Consequences of Playing Ball in the Front Yard and Twas the Day after Thanksgiving, by Brians Sister:

Step-Mom and Backtalk, by Kyle2:
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John Got in Trouble With Daddy, by AvMont87 [Dec. 21st, 2006|04:35 pm]
John Got in Trouble With Daddy is an extremely brief but heartwrenching story about a boy with an abusive father.

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Christmas with Granddad, by Dr Keate [Dec. 21st, 2006|04:29 pm]
Christmas with Granddad is an outstanding story about a thirteen-year-old boy whose parents are in Iran because of his father's job, so he has to spend his Christmas holidays with his grandfather.

Very well-written, it pays a lot of attention to the boy's activities and his grandfather's attempts to get him inetrested in culture. The punishment itself is too harsh for my taste, even taking into account that it happens in the past when one didn’t think very much about strict discipline.

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Captain and Vice and Sustained by Spanking, by Longshot [Dec. 21st, 2006|04:20 pm]
As you know, I'm not really interested in stories about adults getting spanked, especially when sex is involved. It's just not my kink. However, it's a pleasure to read good stories, no matter the subject, and Longshot is a genius. You can enjoy his stories for their psychological and sheer good writing.

In Captain and Vice, a headmaster reluctantly and without much conviction (but harshly) punishes two of his best students, who have been discovered having sex.


In Sustained by Spanking, two workers in a refugee camp in Africa discover that they share an interest in spanking.

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Bangers! and A Well Tanned Derrière, by ZlatyB [Dec. 21st, 2006|03:42 pm]
In A Well Tanned Derrière, Simon and Paul, two English 12-year-old boys, are spending part of their holidays in a nudist camp in France, with Paul's parents.

No clothes, but plenty of opportunities to get in trouble.


In Bangers! the boys get in trouble for playing with firecrackers.


It's very good news when a new outstanding writer arrives at malespank. and ZlatyB is exactly that. He writes very well-written tales of mischievous boys who get in trouble at a time when spankings are commonplace and widely accepted by parents and children. He also pays a lot of attention to the character's motivations, and that helps the reader care about what happens to them.
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A Small Price To Pay, by PJ Franklin [Dec. 15th, 2006|05:45 pm]
An English retired soccer player is in the US working at an university and becomes the coach of an amateur soccer team. One of the players, a 17-year-old boy, is talented but highly undisciplined.

Adult spanking stories are not my thing, but I started reading this one and it was so well-written that I had to read the whole thing. Quite enjoyable, because spankings or no spankings is a good story.

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Brothers in Trouble, by Skinpang [Dec. 13th, 2006|07:28 pm]
A couple of brothers are caught playing with the gaming machines, which is against their school's rules, even though it was done out of school. Both are punished at school, although the eldest brother gets the harsher punishment because young kids don't get the cane.

Well-written, detailed and enjoyable school story by a master of the genre like Skinpang.

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A Snowball Too Far, by Fred Haperton [Dec. 13th, 2006|07:22 pm]
An 11-year-old boy accidentally hits the janitor with a snowball.

It's a very short story and it's not much of a spanking, but it was cute.

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Women Are Evil - 01 - Stage Mom, by Wilvalkir [Dec. 11th, 2006|09:06 pm]
Women Are Evil is the series Wilvalkir uses to group her F/m stories (even though they are not actually part of a series, but standalone stories).

Stage Mom, the first one, is about a 14-year-old boy who takes part, along with his parents, in a community theater's production of "Oliver!". The story is delightful and cute, even if young Nicky's mom proves that women can give a sound spanking too. The relationship between son and parents is loving and there's a sense of humor and a matter-of-fact approach to corporal punishment which is quite charming.

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The House Debate, by Realist II [Dec. 4th, 2006|07:37 pm]
Two boys need to do some research on corporal punishment to prepare a debate in the house debating society at their school. They find some web pages most of us are quite familiar with. As thew issue interests them quite a bit, their research turns quite practical. Nice, well-written homage to some of the fine writers at malespank, although one of them (called Realist II) was treated unfairly, since his atories may be long but never boring :)

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The Adventures of Shan - Part 03: The price of freedom, by Joe de leon [Dec. 4th, 2006|07:36 pm]
In the third part of the series, Daniel decides to buy Shan's freedom, but his temper gets the best of him, and his encounter with Zhou doesn't go exactly as expected.

Beautifully written, poetic, touching... this is a series to follow.

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The Perils of Gastronomy, by Thermionic [Dec. 4th, 2006|07:35 pm]
A 12-year-old boy, not happy with the food he gets at his boarding school, teases some younger children by telling them some repellent lies about the composition of the menu. It's a very well written story by a new writer, and I certainly recommend it. The boys' reaction to the cane is less stoic than in other UK-style school stories.

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Ted Meets Bertie, by Everard Clunes [Nov. 24th, 2006|07:01 pm]
A 15-year-old is told not to mess around with the computer when Dad wasn't at home, but does it anyway and accidentally deletes some important stuff.

Unfortunately it does not have blank lines between paragraphs, which makes it difficult to read on screen, but the story and the father-son relationship depicted are good.

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Dad's "Spanksgiving Day" Indifference, by Wilvalkir [Nov. 24th, 2006|06:58 pm]
15-year-old Eli has to deal with an indifferent dad, a too stern with him mom and a little brother who is supposed to be a genius of some kind.

He finds out that life is not always fair when he is blamed for something his brother did... Of course, he was supposed to be looking after him, but still... And, of course again, his dad does not make things better.

Funny and intelligent, as all treats by Wilvalkir.

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The Good Neighbour, by Tristan [Nov. 24th, 2006|06:48 pm]
An 11-year-old boy is spanked by his neighbor, for throwing fire crackers through his window.

As all of Tristan's stories, this one is well-written and describe intense spankings. Personally, I'd prefer less intense but more realistic spankings, but that's just my personal preference.

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Upsetting Mr Mansell, by ZlatyB [Nov. 17th, 2006|07:12 pm]
Another very good UK school story by ZlatyB, perhaps my favorite one from this writer so far.

Three 13 year old boys who attend music practice at school use that as an excuse to jump the lunch queue, even when they don't have practice.

The relationship between the boys and their music teacher was displayed in a very skillful way, in this particularly fine story.

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The Best Boy in the Whole Blooming World, by Realist II [Nov. 17th, 2006|07:04 pm]
A very long and well-written story by Realist II.

A sixteen year old boy who is a prefect at his school is hired by a rich couple to look after their 11-year-old son during the holidays. David, the younger boy, is quite active and full of energy and his parents wanted to hire an older boy who could be responsible and look after him but also keep up with him and let him have fun.

The two like-minded boys become friends and have fun but David eventually gets in trouble and puts his life in risk.

In spite of its length, it kept my interest at all times and I was sorry it was finished so soon :) I can't help admiring the sportsmanship of most boys in Realist II's stories when they have to accept their punishments.

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The Big, Bad Wolf, by Demos [Nov. 17th, 2006|06:41 pm]
A couple of male lovers protect a young man who is being harshly mistreated by his abusive partner.

An extremely well-written Halloween story. It's heavy on adult spanking/BDSM elements, but when a writer is this good you enjoy the story no matter what your personal preferences are.


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Best of Friends, by Skinpang [Nov. 17th, 2006|06:37 pm]
Another UK-school-style story by Skinpang, well worth reading.

A couple of students skip a lesson and get caught. They are sentenced to detention, but one of them is unable to attend because of a family commitment. A sound caning is offered as an alternative, but both friends will have to choose the same punishment.

Not particularly realistic, maybe, but nice to read. I thought the headmaster was being very nasty, but then there was a final twist which managed to surprise me.

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My Brothers and Me - Parts 03, 05, 07 and 15, by Csd3819 [Nov. 15th, 2006|05:56 pm]
What a treat! :) Four stories by Csd3819, one of my favorite father-son spanking writers.

His stories are realistic, well-written and often rather intense, depicting a family which is loving most of the time, but which has its problems also.

Don't Play Soccer In The House -> This is a short chapter, telling about a spanking the boys get when they are quite young, for playing soccer indoors. I can't help thinking that the matter should have been dealt with in a less strict manner (that's something that happens to me with well-written stories, which get me to care about the characters), but I guess they were different times. The ending is quite sweet.

Camping With Dad and My Brothers -> My favorite story among these four (although all of them are good) is this tale about a camping trip taken by the three boys and their dad. The eldest boy is in that cranky mood elder preteens or younger teens sometimes get into (I can identify myself with that, I'm afraid), and he gets into a strong battle of wills with his father. Intense and extremely good story. The father is overly strict, in my opinion, although I admit the situation must have been frustrating for him. Still, such stern treatment must foster some resentment. There are sweet moments in the story too. The story ends well, but I think that in real life there are no winners in this kind of battles, and only resentment is produced. Still, I have to keep in mind once more that these were different times, and the generally accepted way of dealing with boyish misbehavior was different.

No Cussing -> In this one, the boys' father campaigns to get his sons to stop using filthy vocabulary. Intense once more, and harsh. I wonder why this treatment doesn't cause more rebellion, even if it's just passive rebellions. Wouldn't it cause more anger? The father is not abusive, though. He is loving, but also very strict.

The Alaska Rock -> The three brothers are supposed to be helping with some garden work, but Nick, the middle one, does not like it one bit, and his attitude ends up getting him in trouble. Another very good story.
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Four Times for One Crime, by Terry B [Nov. 15th, 2006|05:27 pm]
Interesting but very short story about a couple of children who get into deep trouble, most of it undeserved, when they take shelter from the rain in a church building. None of the punishments is over the top, but considering that it's mostly unfair and that it's repeated several times... poor kids! :(

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The Adventures of Shan Part 1: New Beginnings, by Joe de leon [Nov. 15th, 2006|05:22 pm]
A new series by this outstanding writer. It's about an outlaw who flees to America in 1884, intending to sell his booty and settle there. However, while he is trying to sell the stolen goods he witnesses a small boy being mistreated. Later, he finds out the boy has run away and is hiding in his wagon.

The plot looks interesting and I'm looking forward to seeing what happens. There are some unsettling sexual references, though (not involving the main character).

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Midtown High School Rules OK?, by ZlatyB [Nov. 15th, 2006|05:14 pm]
A 13-year-old boy misbehaves in the changing room while his school team is visiting another school to play a rugby match. Another good UK-style tale by this writer. Short and to the point but well-written.

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Billy and Tom's first spanking, by Tom [Nov. 15th, 2006|05:09 pm]
A well-done father-son spanking story. Short, but I liked that it was given for a serious offence. Often in these stories the children get very harsh punihments for trivial matters.

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Mrs. Gonzalez Tutoring, by Kyle 2 [Nov. 14th, 2006|06:55 pm]
A new F/m story by Kyle 2, in a similar vein to his other stories. Kyle misbehaves while doing yard work at Mrs. Gonzalez's house and gets punished.

Direct, unsophisticated spankings.

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The Choir - Part 04, by Skoolboi [Nov. 14th, 2006|06:49 pm]
A new chapter in this cute series.

It's the week for the Rev Canon Aubrey Smith-Winsom to be the Canon in residence at the school, and he turns out to be an ass. The triplets, always too quick to react when provoked, unavoidably get in trouble.

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Repercussions From a Misspent Youth - Parts 03 and 04, by Phil Wilson [Nov. 14th, 2006|06:46 pm]
Two new chapters in this well-written and intense series, although I didn't enjoy them as much as I enjoyed the first two. Phil gets into a bet with his older brother about whether he'll be able to make his father give him a very harsh spnaking and... well, these things just don't seem as realistic to me, and I don't enjoy them as much as more traditional spanking stories.


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The Dishonourable Schoolboy, The Refusal and The QC’s Son, by Plagosus [Nov. 14th, 2006|05:51 pm]
Three school stories by Plagosus, enjoyable as ever.

In The Dishonourable Schoolboy, Plagosus has his young protagonist subvert the schoolboys' code of honor, while in The Refusal the target is the prefects system.

Finally, in QC’s Son, he uses a young character who is trying to get out of a punishment to satirize defence lawyers and their sometimes outrageous arguments.



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First taste of the cane, by ZlatyB [Nov. 14th, 2006|05:21 pm]
A good school caning story. An 11 year old student makes his punishment worse by being rebellious about it. I always enjoy these stories with battles of will. I identify with these characters, as I didn't like adults having authority over me, especially when their rules were not reasonable from my point of view.

Of course, a strict school is not the best place to try one of these battles, is it?

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Family Reunion - Part 02, by Graham [Nov. 14th, 2006|05:15 pm]
The second part in this well-written series goes on exploring the relationship between Jason, the young lawyer, and his dad, who has just moved into his house. Normally I don't enjoy adult spanking stories, but I did enjoy this one.

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A Collection of Short Stories (2006), by Y Lee Coyote [Nov. 14th, 2006|05:07 pm]
A collection of very short (up to 500 words) stories by Y Lee Coyote.

Writing a good story in 500 words is not easy and some of these are forgettable, but others explored very interesting ideas. All in all, the collection is well worth reading. You'll need to be willing to devote some time to enjoy it fully (not for those looking for a quick spanking, probably, although the spankings in each individual story are quite quick, for obvious reasons).

My favorite were the ones which pointed you to new things (for example, the story Not the Veldt, which directed you to a Ray Bradbury story available online... read in conjunction with that story, Not the Veldt was much more enjoyable).

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In Strife, by Ripping Yarns [Nov. 6th, 2006|12:19 pm]
Another outstanding story in this nameless series by Ripping Yarns. Ripping Yarns, in case you are not familiar with this author, is a synonym of very high quality stories.

In this story, ten-year-old Jack takes one of his father's tools -a knife- to school. It's not intended as a weapon, as his intentions were quite innocent, but the knife is dangerous and someone gets injured.

The family deal with this in a stern but loving manner.

Wonderful stuff. I especially enjoy the sense of serenity and control the family depicted in these stories transmit.

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Une Fessée For Two French Boys, by Prepschoolmaster [Nov. 3rd, 2006|08:05 pm]
A British headmaster gets the opportunity to discipline a couple of young French boys who are at his school as exchange students. The headmaster certainly enjoys this part of his job, in this well-written spanking story.

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